World history suggests that violence and conflicts were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership. So, for peace to prevail female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership.
Checking the world history , it will be easy to get a conclusion that there are more violence and conflicts happened when the country or area ruled by a male instead of a female leader . it is argued by some that in order to keep peace , the world might be better under female leadership than male leadership . In my personal opinion, while I agree we need more female leaders for diversity, but I don't agree female leaders will cause less violence .
To begin with , there is a typical statistical related misunderstanding about the world history show evident about female leaders are less violent . People ignore a vital truth that there is way less female rulers in the history . For example, china , a country has more than five thousands years history , only had one female leader who ruled china about 15 years .Let's do a simple mathematics calculation. Compare with 5000 years , it is definitely that less violence happened in 15 years , but does it mean female is less violent than male ? obviously , the answer is no .
I think no matter which gender leads , there is always a fair chance for violence and conflicts , because each country's leader tries to protect and maxima their own citizen's safety and profits . but there is another fact we must admit that female leaders in modern society are much less than their countergender . we should encourage and create an enviroment where gives more female chance to be leader for diversity due to the world needs more different voice . Women have the abilities and should take the responsibility to stand together with men to fight for a better future .
In conclusion , the world needs more female leaders not because they are less violent , but because they are adequate for the jobs .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53980805875 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8789464271 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339888115797 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125496361457 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129048131313 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205537063489 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132604195008 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.