The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. What are the possible causes of this rapid change? How can people prepare for work in the future?
As robots and machines are taking over different industries, the job market has changed a lot over time and now it is hard for individuals to continue working in the same field throughout their lives. I will be explaining how modern technology and competition in similar industries are affecting people to get hired. Along with these circumstances, I will also explain that how training and learning extra skills can be helpful for people to find a suitable job in the coming years.
The first and biggest reason I believe behind this drastic change is the advancement in technology. As we can observe in our surroundings that so many jobs that were done by humans now already taken over by computers and robots. Take an example of a report published in Daily News China, it is mentioned in the report that China has a plan to convert its train, buses, and cars to go driverless by 2030. Thus, a big sum of drivers will lose their job to artificial intelligence.
The second reason behind this menace is growing competition within the same industry. The banking sector was high in demand a decade ago, so lots of people adopted to be bankers and still doing so. This has caused a huge influx and now demand has been decreased. For Instance, in Alberta Canada, the petroleum industry attracted lots of talent, but with time when the industry got overcrowded and competition increased people suffered badly. Hence competitive work environment can also be a reason for people not able to carry similar profession entire life.
There are multiple measures that can be taken to handle this increasing concern. The primary solution I believe is that people should be trained to work with modern technology and the government should take initiatives to start such training courses. Another step that can help to overcome the pressure of work and let people be ready for their career could be learning new skills. It can be learning a new language, administrative or technical skills besides their primary occupation.
I will conclude this essay with my opinion that modern technology and competition in similar industry can restrict individual carry on same work throughout his life, but people can be ready for these challenges by training themselves to adopt new technology and learn new skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, second, so, still, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98701298701 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72250170192 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537662337662 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3403253779 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.941176471 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274745685799 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877247280828 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619966998549 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163850151077 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579053256544 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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