Write about the following topic:
It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers.Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools.
what do you think?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
write at least 250 words.
physical activities are very much essential for growing children in terms of health and education.Therefore, exercise a nd other physical education like yoga has to be given more preference.This essay elucidates the reasons and cites certain examples to prove that physical education is a must for young children and for those in the teenage.
it is evident that the children of modern era are engaged with computer games and other entertainment website unlike olden days. The children of the previous generation found more time to be spent on games such as football, basketball, etc which are all outdoor ones. Consequently, they had very well toned, strong muscles and good posture. For example, a survey conducted by the World health organisation on the comparison of the health conditions of previous generation children and children belonging to the current period suggested that about 97 percent of the olden days' kids who were busy with outdoor games and other sports activities were hale and healthy whereas the kids of the modern era are all confined to computers and video games and have less immunity power. Therefore it is proved that if the kids sweat, they will have good health.
Secondly, sport not only brings about good health but also a better concentrating power. What will be the outcome, if the kids are spending more time infront of the coumpters? physical activities such as yoga and meditation brings about an improvement in the concentration of the teenagers who get distracted with other activities. For example, the Yale university conducted a survey and found that the students who are involved in power brain yoga were able to produce good academic result and were also able to pay good attention in the class hours. Henceforth, the school and other educational institutions should make the sport related activities a mandatory one.
To conclude, I would recommend the educational organisations to provide more importance to physical education and would also request parents to teach their childern about the positive effects of physical activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2447761194 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89497763763 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.891255643 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.416666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25601820851 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812104748697 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656314727157 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15756331406 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734722768414 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.