People born today can expect to live longer than people in previous generations. What are some of the positive and negative implications of this phenomenon?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Certain human beings have a belief that those who are not born with capabilities can be trained and taught everything.this essay elucidates that normal kids created by divine without any extra knowledge can be given sufficient training to gain additional talents.
Few people are born intellects with good elligibilties such as sports, music and so on. they have this talent either from their genes where either of their parents have such talents or these are rendered by god as a complement.Famous squash player deepika pallikal's mother is a cricket player in the late seventies. Similarly the famous singer swetha mohan's mother is a popular playback singer sujatha in the malayalam film industry.And hence it is a certitude that talents are either acquired from their parents or are obtained as a gift from the nature.
Secondly there is a verity that a child born without any addtional skills can be tutored and made to acquire such skills. there is a proverb which says "practice makes a man perfect". According to this one can be made to sing or learn music with continuous and vigorus practise. it is only the way how a siege preaches his disciples they chant mantras can be cited as an example. ALthough a person is born as an extra talented one, he must practise his talents daily inorder to retain it. this ensures the claim that a person can be mentored and grown into a mutitalented one.
Some people consider that extra talents can be obtained by continous training while others say that it has to be present in a person when he is born as a child. In conclusion, i strcitly abide by the saying that a child can be made to practice well and persue multiple talents.
- In many countries the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of crime and how can we deal with those 84
- Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends they have just sent you some photos of yours holidays. thank them for the photos and for the holidays explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with y 73
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 73
- Write about the following topic It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers Therefore physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools what do you think Give reasons for your answer and includ 39
- To get a good job today it is more important for children to study mathematics and foreign languages than art and music. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80136986301 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75583236582 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8689522034 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114127977543 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045547978328 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028016184697 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718495605205 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00724466482766 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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