Write about the following topic:
Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult.
Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Technology is ever-evolving. There are several changes happening in terms of daily kitchen appliances and other tools for communication to ease our daily hardwork. It is often argued that modern technology reduces stress, while others trust that these devices only make our daily life more tough. This essay agrees that new technology saves our valuable time and helps to relax as well. This article will discuss both views.
It is certain that nowadays making a perfect work-life balance is necessary which we can get through using the latest innovation of science. Current generation strongly supports that such technologies are labour-saving as well as time saving. It is therefore agreed that smart working through technology ensures to eliminate tension to bring a good daily life balance. For example, in our society, new generation working women are tend to use different appliances, computers in their daily life to save time. They can get their own me time.
However, old generation does not have faith in such mindset. They feel this makes life more problematic as they are not tech-savvy and not familiar with the benefits. They are unaware of the proper use of those devices. Eventually, this increases their stress level. It is disagreed that technology helps to do smart work and save time. For instance, aged people believe in doing manual job instead of using technology. They feel safe and secure this way.
Technology has always helped people from different dimensions in order to make us feel calm. In my experience, I strongly support that using such time-saving mordern devices such as dishwasher, washing machine saves my time and allows me to do things according to my work schedule.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...ciety, new generation working women are tend to use different appliances, computers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17985611511 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66562053562 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5398138057 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7894736842 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6315789474 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224950057828 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631284768882 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642357938244 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141152553616 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493449919149 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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