Write about the following topic:
Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Due to increase in number of academically outstanding students, the university’s admission are challenging for modern teenagers. Some children even end up attending the subjects that they are not really interested in. This essay will explain why study programs should not be limited by the academic grades.
First of all, children should give a chance to study what their passion is. Some argues that without basic skill level, some of the programs may not be suitable for some students and it will create difficulties during their studies process. However, they underestimates the nature of human and how strong the passion effects on human. If students are allowed to study what they are really passionate, they can adapt and overcome all the difficulties.
Secondly, the career and continuing profession will be excellent when these students are graduated. It will in turn benefit to the society since the educated passionate people work with their full potential throughout their career because of passion. For instance, if Elon Mask, the founder of Tasla, was not allowed to study mechanical engineering, electric cars, one of his inventions, that helps to reduce the usage of fuel, will not be able to serve to the society. He can invent this extraordinary innovation only because of his love on mechanical engineering.
To conclude, I strongly agree that students should give a chance to enroll and study their interested program even though there might have barriers for some students. Most importantly, since people will work on what they love after the graduation, our society will surely improve to a positive direction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... argues that without basic skill level, some of the programs may not be suitable for some s...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'underestimate'
Suggestion: underestimate
...ng their studies process. However, they underestimates the nature of human and how strong the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29007633588 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84948652417 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.827289862 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206895172794 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751051106049 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585832850595 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130927232255 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280334510097 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.