Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to enquire about the availability of few household electronic goods. I recently shifted to a new house, which is a couple of blocks away from your shop. I hope I can find whatever I need in your shop.
I would like to buy a two-room heater, one water heater and a smart TV. Bedrooms in my apartment rooms are pretty small, so I am hoping to hear a few recommendations from your end on the size of the room heater. In terms of the water heater, I need the one with sophisticated technology and should store the hot water for a longer period of time. I am looking of the one, which has the capacity of at least 25 – 30 litres of waters. For a TV, it should have a chrome-casting option and I wish to purchase 48 or 48 inches television.
Could you please send me the estimated quotation or sales chart for the above-mentioned products. I have another request, currently, I am out of the town. Could you please confirm how much longer you can hold the products for me? Also, could you please confirm whether home delivery is available or not. As I living only two blocks away, I believe it should not be a problem.
Yours sincerely,
Sudheerkumar Motakatla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...can find whatever I need in your shop. I would like to buy a two-room heater, on...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...should store the hot water for a longer period of time. I am looking of the one, which has the...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...r home delivery is available or not. As I living only two blocks away, I believe ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42533936652 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.763346601 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619909502262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0011843773 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8571428571 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117811156045 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389542503419 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418527101366 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586087430778 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597957318831 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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