WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
With the development of technology, shopping online is getting growing more gradually these days. Hence, a number of people are shopping through online for the convenience. It is shown that offline shops will be closed because of online shopping. Despite the fact this background leads people to controversy wherein stand a range of perspectives regarding this issue, I agree that the majority of shops in towns to close.
First of all, even though some people are still using shops in town and insisting the offline shopping is easier, the online shopping is irrefutable much more convenient in our life than going to shops in town and also, we can buy most of items that we need via the online. For example, firstly, it saves time because we do not have to walk in the shop. Secondly, they deliver the products that we need to in front of our door. Therefore, we do not have to waste time and save our pain.
Secondly, it is more efficient for us to use online shopping. A variety of those who do not use online shopping have to drive their own vehicle or public transportation. It gives rise to use more costs such as fuel or transportation costs. However, using online makes people save their time and their expense. In addition, we can compare price to buy products that we need also they are even cheaper than offline shopping.
In conclusion, people who are not familiar with the internet still go to shop to buy what they need. However, nowadays, we are using the internet most of time such as a smartphone and computer. It is said that many people still use shops in town but our life style has been being changed. For this reasons, I agree that all shops in city and town get closing consequently because online shopping is more convenient and efficient in our living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the items') or simply say ''most items''.
Suggestion: most of the items; most items
...g to shops in town and also, we can buy most of items that we need via the online. For exampl...
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Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... life style has been being changed. For this reasons, I agree that all shops in city...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67619047619 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52526462994 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479365079365 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1311893175 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6470588235 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2352941176 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193381941179 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733804527028 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600610117135 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139302795107 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459983756184 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.