You are thinking of moving to a new country.
Outline some of the factors and questions you must consider before you make a final decision.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
I am planning to migrate to an Australia to settle there. Before I proceed my migration, I need to do some homework to make it in the best way to settle over there without any consequences.
Firstly, the cost of living in an Australia is much more expensive than other countries. So according to that, I have to arrange the financial things to accomplish the expenses. The relocation cost of accommodation is very expensive. So we have to choose the location, where we are going to stay over there. Once, we fixed the district and house, we should not keep on changing our home. I leads to more spending of money.
Secondly, the employment is very competitive in the Australia. So we will have to struggle lot to get a job, which is suitable for our career. We prepare our self to make bit more confident in our technical and analytic skills. We have to competitive and fit to the job market.
Thirdly, the english language skills would have to improve. We need to achieve the band that an Australian migration department expect from us. This is the essential and more important prospective stage in the migration process. So we need to improve our language skills as much to achieve the target.
The last and the final one is health. We have to be physically fit and mentally normal to get into the Australia. The doctor panel for an Australia migration department will provide the certification for our health. So we have to do exercise and take care of our health before going for the medical examination.
The above following factors are very essential for an Australia migration. So we have to file all over the steps before proceeding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...should not keep on changing our home. I leads to more spending of money. Secondly,...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.184375 0.247107183377 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.171875 0.155533422707 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.075 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0625 0.0501214627716 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.084375 0.0437548338989 193% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.1 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.01875 0.0403226058552 46% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.77435294777 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.078125 0.0326793684256 239% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10625 0.0861772015684 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0125 0.021408717616 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00625 0.011925033212 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1652.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71626297578 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321799307958 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256055363322 0.28420135186 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193771626298 0.203846283523 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138408304498 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77435294777 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515570934256 0.56093040696 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.2479447839 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.1363636364 20.7743622355 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.3663441224 49.517814964 43% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0909090909 127.492653851 59% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1363636364 20.7743622355 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.814263465372 45% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 38.7418999685 49.1944974215 79% => OK
Elegance: 0.950980392157 1.69124875643 56% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188631978458 0.332605444948 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0768099306358 0.102741220458 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0690494896634 0.0668466124924 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.563082087044 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12617605919 0.148594505496 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083008550958 0.134430193775 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291729441001 0.0742795772207 39% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.402119739676 0.324371583561 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0546615644948 0.0638462369009 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129079576347 0.228012699653 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263905281407 0.058150111329 45% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.41683366733 322% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.