You had just missed a friend’s part, write a letter apologizing and stating
reasons why you couldn’t attend the party. Ask how fun it was.
Dear John,
Thank you so much for inviting me to your party. It was very generous of you to put me up at your place for your party. I would have loved to come at your occasion, but unfortunately due to my hectic work schedule, I was unable to arrive at your party.
We have just received an exciting project for our company and my boss has made me the leader of our software development team. Because of work overload, we often have to work overnight. I could not even celebrate my anniversary since I was busy with my job. As deadline for finishing the project is approaching fast, we must put extra efforts to make our project successful.
Would you be kind enough to forgive me for not making it to your party? I hope your party was a blast! I guess your cousin jimmy had cracked some jokes which made everyone laugh at the party. I Promise you whenever I will get free time, I will visit you in person to hear the exciting details of your party.
I can’t wait to hear a reply from you.
Your sincerely,
Rafsun
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, Thank you so much for inviting me to you...
^^^
Line 6, column 193, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...which made everyone laugh at the party. I Promise you whenever I will get free ti...
^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the exciting details of your party. I can't wait to hear a reply from yo...
^
Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar a reply from you. Your sincerely, Rafsun
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41666666667 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40313651384 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598958333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.232051258 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151367179554 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631094586985 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557988747292 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113643770234 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575305435685 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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