Although doing exercise is believed to be crucial for health, there are other more important things. As far as I am concerned, this essay will outline the two views and state my preference.
To begin with, regular exercise has been commonly regarded as an unavoidable role in one's life because of the benefits on health it might bring about. Because of the rapid population growth especially in large cities, most people have to work harder above ten hours per day to make ends meet which accidentally contributes to multiple potential threats for physical and mental health. Therefore, adhering to a strict healthy routine could not only tremendously reduce the number of metabolic diseases including obesity but also increasingly boost the spirit that might boost their productivity. As a matter of fact, students studying in high schools should add physical exercise to their routine, because this is the decisive period for physical and mental development.
However, a couple of things should be considered as important as exercise. Focusing on studying plays a crucial element in one's life, because it offers opportunities to become a successful person. People do not necessarily study in school, instead, they could choose how they approach information. By staying focused on searching and learning the latest knowledge, citizens especially young people become not only confident but also develop critical thinking based on their awareness which leads to proper decisions in life. Also, being a heart-warming and kind person could bring happiness for other people and society when it comes to helping each other. For instance, a homeless kid voluntarily arranged pairs of shoes' students in a row in a public destination, so he has a chance to go to school due to the donation of locals across the country.
In conclusion, despite the importance of exercise on health, staying focused on studying and being a kind person also offer people good health by sharing love and being successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22118380062 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79732738839 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9025030464 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.923076923 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125891219546 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502800270115 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646025366597 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960133213677 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04151336448 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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