You have had a class discussion on the importance of exercise. Now your teacher has asked you to write a composition answering the following question: Exercise is important for our health, but are there things that are more important? Write your composition.
Nowadays, some people think that not only exercise is important but also other things are more necessary. this soon became a major sources of debatement. In this essay, I will discuss both view and give my opinion
First, there is no denying that doing exercise everyday is an important part of life that will make us stay fit and healthy. this can be explain that implementation will prevent several disease away from us such as obesity, reducing the ratio of fat in our blood. For instance, according to a survey, the comparison between active person who doing bodybuilding annually and person who only sitting at home doing nothing but surfing the web. The result was recorded that the ratio of obesity is about 50% in non-active person while this was 5% in active person. The consequence also showed us that dynamic person also have a low rate of depression, and they are always optimistic
Second, not only exercise motivate our health but also food, bed time, ect.. If you take a exercise permanent but refuse having a balance meal, staying late at night as a habit, you still get various of diseases, not also ill, but even cancer! For example, a Vietnamese girl who always stay late at night, she is a hard-working person, that is the reason. although she always takes exercise, she still caught a blood cancer.
In conclusion, taking exercise is a good choice to have a healthy life, but other things such as meal, a good sleep,...ect. you must to co-ordinate all the factor to stay strong.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...t also other things are more necessary. this soon became a major sources of debateme...
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Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...there is no denying that doing exercise everyday is an important part of life that will ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...that will make us stay fit and healthy. this can be explain that implementation will...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... our health but also food, bed time, ect.. If you take a exercise permanent but re...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... also food, bed time, ect.. If you take a exercise permanent but refuse having a ...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Although
...ard-working person, that is the reason. although she always takes exercise, she still ca...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... other things such as meal, a good sleep,...ect. you must to co-ordinate all the f...
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...ings such as meal, a good sleep,...ect. you must to co-ordinate all the factor to s...
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Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... such as meal, a good sleep,...ect. you must to co-ordinate all the factor to stay stro...
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Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ordinate all the factor to stay strong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75862068966 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54669692217 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2860069 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.909090909 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147695222176 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526571260968 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466893332064 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910811138078 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247007976036 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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