You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
Describe the item
Explain where and when you left it
Say what action you would like the company to take.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to inform that I lost baggage at Double Decker express when traveling to New Delhi from Jaipur on Sunday 3rd August 2017. The incident happened around 9 AM while train had crossed Cantonment station. The train was crowded and I could not observe the person who took my suitcase. I was sitting on the seat#33 in compartment number 5 of the train. I alerted the co passengers, however they could not find the suitcase.
To give you appearance of my suitcase, it is a brown colour with a black handle on the top and it had important business proposals of my company for upcoming Business Summit in Delhi. In addition, it has my tablet, a mobile charger, my government identification proofs and some business suits. The total loss estimated should be around 10,000 rupees.
It would be great if this letter can be taken as complaint and help me in finding my suitcase at the earliest. I have enclosed copy of the ticket for reference and can be reached on XYZ@gmail.com for further details. Looking forward to a prompt action.
Yours sincerely
Peter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y suitcase. I was sitting on the seat#33 in compartment number 5 of the train. I...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75789473684 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67874055659 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678947368421 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6756054489 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131240951251 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396697704139 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362929789285 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734868955364 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286653183627 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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