You have recently moved into a new apartment. Write a letter to Your friend in your letter and tell your friend why you moved. Discribe the new apartment and invite your friend to a visit.
Dear Sam,
I hope you are at pink of your health there! By the way, this time I have come up with some exciting news. Finally I have moved to a new flat where there's no tension on the noisy neighbourhood nor annoying landlord.
This accommodation is the best I have ever stayed by the virtue of it's stunning facilities. I'm damn sure that you will enjoy the well ventilated spacious drawing room with broad matching leather sofas. Now I have a separate bedroom as my sister had but mom and dad's bedroom is larger than ours. A tiny patch of lawn in the parking lot brings serenity to our home.
Dude, i couldn't invite you on housewarming day as the function was for only elderly relatives, you might know it. I am thinking about throwing a party for our gang in our apartment. Why can't you come down the weekend to enjoy a barbecue dinner at our new home. When you come either just call me to my current number or come with Tom, he knows the location.
See you soon
Your friend
Adam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...I have come up with some exciting news. Finally I have moved to a new flat where theres...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...inally I have moved to a new flat where theres no tension on the noisy neighbourhood n...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... the virtue of its stunning facilities. Im damn sure that you will enjoy the well ...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...brings serenity to our home. Dude, i couldnt invite you on housewarming day as the f...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...arty for our gang in our apartment. Why cant you come down the weekend to enjoy a ba...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue dinner at our new home. When you come either just call me to my current number...
^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., he knows the location. See you soon Your friend Adam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, well, as for, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41081081081 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35197879171 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708108108108 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4776842204 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.1818181818 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232105549718 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836260392624 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966749912297 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109831013576 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535150916759 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.