You should spend 20 minutes on this task.
During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
Remind him when and where you met
Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
Say why you thin you would be suitable for the job
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows :
Dear …….. ,
Dear Roger,
Regarding the discussion we had on the plane about a job opportunity in one of your restaurants. To refresh your memory, we were aboard the flighr 6RTS on 25th October 2021 travelling from vancouver to Ontario. The flight took off at 1800 Hours and touched down at 2000 Hours, during which we met and had a conversation.
Turning to the type of job opportunity, I am particularly interested in the managerial position, although a job in HR department would be fine as well.
Now, About my experience, I have 4 years of experience as a Branch Manager and 2 years of know-how as an HR. Furthermore, I am a top level graduate with a degree in Hotel Management. I would like to be considered for a managerial position due to my experience as a manager being higher. As you know, relocating is not a problem for me, as I currently do not have any such responsibilities that weigh me down to a stay a single place.
Expecting a reply from you soon, If you need any more information do not hesitate to contact me at gaurav.upadhayay@gmail.com.
Thanking You,
Gaurav Upadhyay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6875 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44141191551 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1300467854 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135344214867 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535290182276 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058889755614 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07085008414 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498858315853 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.