You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.
Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.
Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
As the world is growing every day, the population explosion is inevitable. What else is inevitable is restricting talented people from migrating or moving to richer countries to seek better education, work facilities and life styles for them and their families. I personally see this change as the only way going forward and the following essay would highlight some of factors in favour of this.
To begin with, Statistically proven, on the daily basis skilled and talented people are migrating for better choices and lifestyles to richer and more prosperous country and why not? These qualified people barely get any opportunities in their own weaker countries due to lack of funds, regulations or infrastructure. For example - research shows every year number of the immigration visas applied for the countries like USA, the UK and Australia are growing exponentially. This clearly depicts the choices and consensus of the general population clearly citing people mindset.
Furthermore, there is a herd mentality as well where no one wants to stay back and serve their country with poor remuneration. Reports show that peer pressure has been impacting the youth in a massive way where they want to get as good of education or job as their counterparts and do not want to be lagged behind. Youth is also full of energy today and ready to take challenges and any risks which further adds on to this population outflux. And again, this all makes perfect sense as everyone has the right to grow and live their lives passionately and make full use of their talent. For instance -this change can be clearly seen in the research where youth clearly is the topping the major section of society which is moving out on average.
To conclude, though there is no denial that weaker countries are simply becoming weaker due to talent migration yet unless the local government itself intervenes and tries to provide better opportunities for locals, sadly this brain drain may never end.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the factors') or simply say ''some factors''.
Suggestion: some of the factors; some factors
...and the following essay would highlight some of factors in favour of this. To begin with, St...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a massive way" with adverb for "massive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...r pressure has been impacting the youth in a massive way where they want to get as good of educa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04573170732 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70875415342 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0248311406 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.307692308 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140332525427 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492118219379 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356012853905 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850268852081 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049240048586 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.