You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Respected Sir/Madam,
This letter regards my keenness to join your esteemed course for computer learning, published in the newspaper lately.
To begin with, I have always been interested in the fields of the Computing world but due to some adverse scenarios, was never been able to get engaged with the mentioned studies. But, recently your advertisement about a new upcoming computer course has really caught my eyes and I had almost contemplated going for it.
But to my sheer disappointment, I got to know that for the above course I an elementary course is mandatory which unfortunately I have had not done before. Honestly, I was so looking forward to this course but this compulsary clause has actually dashed all my dreams to pursue computer science.
Therefore, can I please ask if any exception can be made here so that I can fulfill my deep desire to learn this course? As I really want to grow my future career in this field, learning this course will act as a boon to my life and would definitely give a great boost towards that.
I sincerely hope you would consider the above. Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Jack Nicolson
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...got to know that for the above course I an elementary course is mandatory which un...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, honestly, if, look, really, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72249697813 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6640097416 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.555555556 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261372828668 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102856780253 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705151892312 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119171936238 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819581326769 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...got to know that for the above course I an elementary course is mandatory which un...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, honestly, if, look, really, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72249697813 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6640097416 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.555555556 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261372828668 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102856780253 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705151892312 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119171936238 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819581326769 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.