You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic.
Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 254 words.
Nowadays, with the world's evolution the human creates a vaccine to avoid the human to contract a specific disease. The vaccine was a big discovery of the humanity and it is helping the people feel safe. However, some people do not believe on vaccine and think that they children do not need to be immunized or maybe the parents just do not want to spend money to immunize them thinking that the child can be immunized from the antibodies that we can develop.
In my opinion, this kind of thought is not right when we are talking about children's life. Moreover, I strongly agree that the government must make laws to protect their life. It can be determining that everyone take care about the kids and who do not follow the rules should be fined or even go to the prison.
We are currently living in a situation that I never see anything like this before that is the new corona virus. This virus is really dangerous which are killing several people around the world. The worst thing of this virus is because it is spread quickly and to avoid spreading this virus some government had to make big decisions and required to close a lot of business and public parks to keep the population inside their houses.
In conclusion, when we talk about the Covid-19 that is the name of the new corona virus we see how important is the vaccine in our life and we would be living better if we already have this vaccine against this disease to save the life of population. Although, some people do not agree with what I am saying but everyone should want to vaccine the children and protect their family and the government should make laws to make sure that everyone is taking the vaccine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
Nowadays, with the worlds evolution the human creates a vaccine t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, in conclusion, kind of, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53618421053 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31840229023 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506578947368 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.331161229 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187241254322 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673228530659 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052354149379 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118309140392 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492136821984 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.