You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away.
Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Mr. Senthil,
I am writing this letter to express my desire for working at the headquarter of our company in the Netherlands for a short period of six months.
As you are aware, our company is looking for a candidate who can work in the main office for six months. Therefore, I thought I should grab this golden opportunity of working in a different country. In addition to this, by working there, I may enhance my skills and broaden the horizon of my knowledge. I have also heard that our company conducts weekend training sessions which may enhance my product knowledge and required set of skills.
I have already conveyed to Mahesh about the same and he has agreed to take up my all work responsibilities during my absence. Moreover, I will not only stay in touch with my team but will also check my emails daily. If my request for foreign posting is accepted, I will make sure that no work is left pending at my end.
Finally, I would need your assistance in getting approvals for my posting in the Netherlands from competent authorities.
I look forward to your positive reply.
Yours sincerely,
Hero Devrani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ter to express my desire for working at the headquarter of our company in the Netherlands for a...
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Line 4, column 426, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "required set" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'set' or 'to be set'.
Suggestion: set; to be set
...hance my product knowledge and required set of skills. I have already conveyed t...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75252525253 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7085637749 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2174756783 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5454545455 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261335077049 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105874734402 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848071892013 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14583790228 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725233740612 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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