Young generations prefer to marry and have children when they become 30and above and they no longer state their marriage and family life at a young age. Do you agree with this?
Marriage has been always a sacred relationship which followed by a lot of serious responsibilities. Whilst some of the new generations are of the belief that getting married in elder age and delaying parenthood, others have a diverse view. I am of the opinion that youth should start forming a family at a young age. In this essay, my point of view will be demonstrated before reaching a conclusion.
To begin with, stating a family in an earlier stage of life allows having children at a young age. In other words, marriage between twenty to twenty-five and before thirty has its significant merits. Not only does marriage at an early age help to avoid the gap generation between parents and their children but also it creates an understanding among them. Moreover, it gives a chance to mothers and fathers to raise offspring before they reach the fifties. For instance, in 2008, an article has been published in The New York Times showed that 50% of societal successful students come from families with younger parents due to their understanding at home.
In addition to that, despite the financial obstacles that younger couples face at the start of their journey, they are more likely to have a stronger relationship. As an illustration, youth married couples tend to draw their future and dreams together and accomplishing their mutual goals has a positive impact on their family life. This can be witnessed in Egypt where almost 45% of divorce cases occurs between elder couples due to the misunderstanding among them.
In conclusion, in the modern era, it has become a societal trend among many couples to delay their marriage and parenthood to a later stage of life; I want to restate my opinion that youth ought to marry before they become thirty. It is recommended that government should provide marriage facilities for both genders to help them to settle and start their life early.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...lot of serious responsibilities. Whilst some of the new generations are of the belief that ...
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Line 7, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m to settle and start their life early.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.946875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78745620762 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6552472476 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31939320454 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103383907362 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785970348871 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18262655484 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363669159512 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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