The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technological developments. How far do you agree?
There is a controversial issue about who is in charge of innovations in technology. Some politicians state that young people should take this responsibility. However, some computer scholars argue that they should be exempted from this burden. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and agree with the idea of not making growing population accountable for this.
Let us start with reasons why some politicians advocate that young people should take accountability for technological improvements. The first factor is that they have faster cognitive skills. Unlike older generation, youngsters tend to learn as well as develop technology quickly, since they naturally take everything new as part of either a game or competition. Another cause is that they are more energetic. Young people frequently work harder, because they have not suffered much from mental disorders, such as stress and insomnia, which commonly make older people get tired earlier. After analyzing, it is clear that young people should be accountable for technological growth.
Nevertheless, some computer scientists state that youngsters should be free from this commitment. They justify their opinion with the following arguments. Firstly, young people should concentrate on other obligations. Students, for example, should focus on study and future employment, so that they can apply for high-paid jobs and then maintain their own families, but the responsibility for technological improvement would distract them from these basic needs. Secondly, they also can share this obligation with older population. As well as young people, their parents can contribute to the creation of technology, for they have both much time, experience and effort to invent fresh ideas and solutions. After considering, it is obvious that young people should not be made obligatory for innovation.
In conclusion, even though some politicians say that young people should adopt the major responsibility for technological improvements, I think that they should be released from this task for the above mentioned arguments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60883280757 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0214398401 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583596214511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.6995463961 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7777777778 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985928577162 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326502822894 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431123908729 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746925470637 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271351578931 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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