In your English class you have been talking about the fashion industry. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.
Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people’s lives.
Do you agree?
It is said that people's lives nowadays are affected extremely badly by the fashion industry. I think there are three main reasons that cause this issue, include the importance of people's appearance, the cost of types of clothes, and the materials that are made into clothes. To start with, it is undeniable that clothes play a vital role in forming people's appearance, which makes people take pride in and be more confident in themselves. Therefore, numerous individuals usually take care of their looks too much in both work and social life like what types of shirts or pants should be worn, or even they criticize someone else merely by their appearance. They seem to forget everything around them, and they do not realize that clothes just make people more beautiful outside but not inside. Secondly, earning their living is not easy, on the contrary a number of people have a tendency of fashion, especially they do not care for the price of clothes. This leads to spend too much time and money on buying consequently a plethora of kinds of clothes, even a number of of them are too expensive and unsuitable for their normal lives. Lastly, there are a huge variety of clothing stores in the world from a tiny shop to a well-known store. However, people rarely pay much attention to what the clothes are from. In another word, some kinds of clothes are made from wild animal's skin, and even endangered animals. It is illegal and the special wild animals become extinct. In conclusion, people are suffering from the disastrous effects of the fashion industry because of three causes that are given.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1069, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...hora of kinds of clothes, even a number of of them are too expensive and unsuitable f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82181818182 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46891149435 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8320729368 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143040936183 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060130539373 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646152116218 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143040936183 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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