In 20 years there will be fewer cars than today. Do you agree or disagree?
The number of cars are increasing day by day and the automobile industry is at its peak than at any point in human history. While many predict that this number is evergrowing, I accord to the idea that this will come to an end in few years and start decreasing. Throughout the essay i have mentione several reason to bolster my claim.
One of the main reasons for this is the scarcity of fuel in today's times which is leading to an increase in price of gas and oil. Eventually this will reach a point where its not econocomically viable to own cars. Even though some might argue about the presence of electrical cars, I'd like to point out the huge price difference between electrical cars and the traditional ones. It is highly unlikely that the prices of these electric cars will reduce to an affordable rate, especially for the middle-class, in the next twenty years.
My personal experience is another compelling example of this. About a year ago, the metro rail started operating in my city which was much faster and cheaper way to commute. As a result I stopped using my car on a daily basis. This was highly economical, time saving and spared me the stress of going through everyday traffic. The population is only going to increase in the next twenty years, which means the the traffic on roads will be way more than it is today. Majority would agree that a high amount of patience required to get through the cacophony everyday during the rush hour traffic. I definitely predict a positive shift in the mindset of people which will lead them to abandon their automobiles and switch to public transportation.
Another reason to support my argument is the rising environmental protection activism and widespread awareness. People are more aware of the damages caused to the environment by human actions and many of them are willing to make a change. This attitude will lead to a much more energy efficient community who use less of these greenhouse gas emitting vehicles.
In conclusion, I'm of the opinion that there will be a decline in number of cars twenty years from now than today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75749318801 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.635022496 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561307901907 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4840071408 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27777777778 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195953532811 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058488109791 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703895530802 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13035553065 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090624664492 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.