Now a day pollution and global warming are the biggest challenge. These problems are human made. To fulfil the human need to expand farmland, housing and industry. I disagree with the statement that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. My view is based on many reasons those are mentioned below.
First, endangered people is a symbol of the good and healthy environment. Now a day people are going through a lot of disease and these are the result of unhealthy foods, polluted air. To save the environment we need to improve ecosystem. Ecosystem helps people in many ways. For example, it helps in growing food. Foods are basically come from the agriculture, but forest, marines and water sources are the good sources of balanced diet. Sea foods are high sources of proteins.
Secondly, plants are used in medicines even some animals are also used in medicines. For example, Ayurveda is medicines system which are thousands of years old and origin this system is Indian. Ayurvedic medicine sources is forest; it basically found in Himalyan forest. This medicine are totally organic and have no side effects of medicines. In addition to this, Rhino horn is used in cancer treatment. Therefore , there are many plants and animals which are used in medication system, so it is necessary to save that.
Finally, the human activity are getting dangerous day by day. Ozone layer depletion and deforestation all gifted by humans, and their harsh effects on all living things. If we don't save the forest then human being will also get extinct as a endangered animals due to ultraviolet rays and contaminated air.
From the above reasons and examples, i strongly believe that endangered animal and forest are important for the human as compared to the farmland, industry and housing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, even so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57358021816 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7691990476 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7727272727 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3636363636 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68181818182 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278625119005 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705860922407 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109974297682 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161508989619 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115202783641 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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