Knowledge is power and it is one the mandatory factor to achieving the goals in your life. Different people have different learning skills. Some people learn from books or other learn by experiences. Both are right on own places. From my point of view, learning from the experiences is very effective for many reasons.
First, experience make people expert in their field. To implement the bookies or theoretical knowledge people need to keep practicing. For instance, If doctor have only theoretical knowledge about the subjects then they do not able to recognise the illness or symptoms of the diseases. That's why to become a good doctor, they need to go through the many stages of learning like mandatory internship, trainee, works under a expert doctors etc. Because how might be academically, they could not do any surgeries independently without going through the practice.
Secondly, experience taught us endurance. For example, If doctor got bored during the patient surgery or during the seeing reports carefully then he or she might do wrong surgery or wrong information about the patient. Sometimes in emergency situation doctor's have to visit immediately for the patient’s help to a remote area in mid-night. In these type of the situation, they need to have a endurace power to face this situation.
Form the above reasons and examples, it seems like, In all things experience is necessary but in some cases,it is not really needed. Sometime you get enough knowledge from the book. For example, knowing world history or geography. To gaining knowledge about mountain or sea species, you do not need to climb the mountain or dive in the sea. Bookies knowledge is enough for these, if you are not really passionate about seeing things in reality.
In summary, gaining knowledge from books and experiences both are effective in own way. But I strongly support that to become an expert in a field , experience is most needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in summary, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.109375 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75798951195 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0827375605 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8571428571 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2380952381 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182115291005 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560145718042 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553767516418 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109666494968 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569016353441 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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