Most people think that difficult experiences could impact them negatively. However, it is well known that difficult situations in our life help us to understand our environment as a society and as a result of this, keep us improving our knowledge in order to have more experience. In the next lines I will show you some reasons related to difficult experiences and how they become valuable lessons in our future life.
Firstly, life based in difficult experiences could help you to understand the sense of your life. For example, if you have to study for an exam related to your career, you must to spend your time reading lessons and even making some exercises before the day to take your test. As an experience, when I was a teenager, I can remember that I had to take an admission test in order to apply to a public university. Eventhough, I prefer to spend my time in other activities instead of studying and practicing before the test, and as a result of that, when I finally went to take my test, I could not applied, because I needed to skim my notes and remember how to answer the question in a variety of topics. Therefore, when the test was over, I felt very stressed and frustrated because of my irresponsibility. Moreover, I had to wait at least one year to take the next opportunity, in order to apply to the university.
Secondly, saving money for the future. This is another situation in which many people prefer to spend their money in things less important than improve their future. For example, when I was coursing my career, I had to work very hard in order to pay my studies and my appartment, it was very difficult because I could not save almost anything for my future. However, when I finally got a promotion, I could have extra money and I did prefer to use it in unimportant activities than in my future. As a result of that, I had to wait for at least ten years to buy a car and and almost 15 years to buy my house. Eventhough, I have to wait a lot of time to be aware of my situation and realize my projects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...for an exam related to your career, you must to spend your time reading lessons and eve...
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'apply'
Suggestion: apply
...nally went to take my test, I could not applied, because I needed to skim my notes and ...
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Line 5, column 568, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...ait for at least ten years to buy a car and and almost 15 years to buy my house. Eventh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4335106383 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70593502708 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441489361702 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2887472929 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0666666667 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180308158296 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669472613439 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611327583501 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141723029709 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082243030131 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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