By and large, traveling is one the major entertainment of individuals. In this regard, various types of methods have been utilized by persons in order to have an appropriate travel. While a number of general public tend to travel in a group with a tour guide, I am personally inclined to travel by myself or with a few persons due to several reasons, two of which are developing of the technology and adjusting the programs of a travel.
In general, traveling alone and without any tour instructor can be the most effective approach. The most significant reason that should be taken into account is that, these days, the technology has improved dramatically. As it is clear, the world goes toward elevated levels of technology noticeably in the entire branches, one of which is in traveling filed. As a result, a large number of electrical devices such as GPS, guidelines, hand books, maps, websites and channels have been established by officials of every county and city. These kinds of apparatus and networks can be the best leader for travelers. Therefore, never do persons need a tour guide. In addition, thanks to free internet in all over the nations, these pieces of information can be achieved freely. However, hiring a tour guide can be highly costly for travelers. For example, last year I had a travel to the numerous parts of Europe. On that trip, owing to my limited budget, I attempted to choose economic manners. After investigations, I decided to travel by myself without any expensive tour or instructor. Eventually, I installed numerous applications in terms of hotels, cultures, foods, famous places and etc. Thus, never did I need a person to guide me.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that general population can adjust their plans easily. Obviously, managing the time and days during a journey is the most indispensable issue. On the other hand, only persons by themselves can have a suitable control as to their plans like favorite places, foods and etc. Furthermore, members of a group have a wide ranges of desires and demand. Hence, for a better agreement in a group, normally, a tour guide decide instead of travelers. For example, I had one experience regarding the traveling by a large group and a tour guide. On that travel, all members had different requests and they could not agree with each other. Ultimately, the tour guide made a decision and took the group into historical places of the region. Nevertheless, I do not have any tendency toward the ancient places and constructions. Consequently, I could not benefit from that travel.
All in all, whether traveling in a group led by a tour guide is the best style has turned into a huge debate among everyone. In this case, I strongly assert that traveling without them is better owing to advancement of the technology and regulating the schedules.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'appropriate travel'.
Suggestion: appropriate travel
...en utilized by persons in order to have an appropriate travel. While a number of general public tend ...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...n appropriate travel. While a number of general public tend to travel in a group with a tour g...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
...echnology and adjusting the programs of a travel. In general, traveling alone and wit...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ich is in traveling filed. As a result, a large number of electrical devices such as GPS, guideli...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
...travelers. For example, last year I had a travel to the numerous parts of Europe. On tha...
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... hotels, cultures, foods, famous places and etc. Thus, never did I need a person to guid...
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...their plans like favorite places, foods and etc. Furthermore, members of a group have a ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...echnology and regulating the schedules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, in addition, in general, such as, as a result, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2381.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92960662526 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84056311073 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51966873706 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5592151917 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0357142857 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192733573705 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05071412594 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487028595848 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129911736266 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226605821989 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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