The ability to maintain a small number of friends for a long time is more important to happiness than the ability to make new friends easily.
With the technology developing, people are focusing their attention to the popular topic which is the social relationship. Nowadays, it seems to make new friends due to variables path to make friends and maintain the friendship. Some argues that it is critical to make new friends easily to gain happiness. Others hold the opposite opinion and support that we should keep maintain only small number of friends for a long time to gain happiness. From my own perspective, I side with the latter one with the following reasons.
First come into mind is that old friends know you much better than new friends. Old friends who keep friendship with me for several years, they can easily to help me to get through the dilemma I meet in my life. I studied aboard for my master degree in a prestigious university. However, I felt it was so hard to keep the pace with professor and finish the homework on time. What’s worse, I did not make some new friends in US. Lucky me, I still got some of my best friends in China. So I will talked with them about the situation that I was facing. They gave me tons of suggestions and comfort me to carry on. Their suggestions were extreme useful to me, because these pieces of advice were made that standing in my angle and suit my characteristic. That’s the reason why I can pass the dilemma for short time. In this way, I do not believe new friends can provide such advice for me, because they know nothing about me, besides they are unable to help me to solve my own problems in my shoes.
Another aspect to point out is that maintaining friendship itself will provide happiness to us and making friends will not. For me, the happiness comes when my friends and I solve the problem which is the barrier to our friendship. It always have some small disagreement or different opinion among friends. So it is the time for us to solve the problem without damaging our friendship. To illustrate clearly, I am taking my own experience as an example. I and my friends Madura have a different opinion about finishing group project. He insists that we have to use Latex as a word editor to finish our projects, but for me, we do not have enough time to care about the format of the report and we should the limited time in the content. We even have a small fight for this issue. We try to understand other’s points when we calm down. In addition, our friendship become even stronger after this small argument, because we understand each other much better than before. As a result, we gain happiness during maintaining our friendship.
Admittedly, it is much more easily to make new friends to gain a happiness to some extent. We are able to make so called new friends through the apps in our smart phone, and gain the excitement of knowing strangers. However, I do not considers it as kind of happiness. For me, happiness is a perish thing that we should tried hard for a long time and then we deserve it.Thus, I cannot gain any happiness for getting to know new friends easily.
On the whole, according to above-mentioned points and ideas, it is crystal-clear that we gain happiness for keeping a long time friendship with small number of friends than making new friends easily.
- The ability to maintain a small number of friends for a long time is more important to happiness than the ability to make new friends easily. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'talk'
Suggestion: talk
... of my best friends in China. So I will talked with them about the situation that I wa...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...he barrier to our friendship. It always have some small disagreement or different op...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'consider'?
Suggestion: consider
...of knowing strangers. However, I do not considers it as kind of happiness. For me, happin...
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Line 7, column 291, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...kind of happiness. For me, happiness is a perish thing that we should tried hard for a l...
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Line 7, column 371, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... for a long time and then we deserve it.Thus, I cannot gain any happiness for gettin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, still, then, thus, in addition, kind of, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 92.0 43.0788530466 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2657.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 575.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62086956522 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62268942328 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438260869565 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 806.4 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6168957372 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.03125 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.96875 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349817091199 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10181507752 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102061476266 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269813749296 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101046740972 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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