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(A/D) For a business to be successful, more money must be put in advertising.
In a business, people often possess different perspectives on whether they should invest more money in advertising. Some insist that advertising is beneficial, while some contend that advertising may not be that effective. Based on my personal experience and observation of life, I agree that for a business to be successful, more money must be put in advertising.
First of all, advertising gives a business’ products exposure to potential customers and the media, and urge them to buy it. That is to say, if a business does not invest money in advertising, or invest only limited resources in a...
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Sentence: First of all, advertising gives a business' products exposure to potential customers and the media,
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to products and exposure
and urge them to buy it
Description: 'it' refers to what?
Sentence: Their advertisements prevails our daily lives.
Description: The fragment advertisements prevails our is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace prevails with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: In conclusion, based on the reasons and exapmples illustrated above, I strongly agree that if a business wishes to be successful, it should put more money in advertising.
Error: exapmples Suggestion: examples
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Category: Very Good Excellent
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.464 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.176 4.6
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.905 21.0
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