Novel technological inventions has truly revolutionized our world. There has been a tremendous growth in the field of transportation and communication which enabled the nations to progress forward. However, I think that the advent of internet to the world has bring forth numerous benefits which is explained in the following.
Firstly, internet enabled limitless search through the search engines for instance,yahoo, google. This has helped man to find information he is not aware of. Likewise, students search their assignments, report and thesis submission easily by using this search engines. Thus internet provides vast amount of information is available at our convenience and economically.
Secondly, internet is very much essential for the survival of business.For example with the invent of electronic commerce the business transactions have become convenient. Similarly, the shopping websites amazon which is one of the leading site for trading products have made the life hassle free in this era of fast moving world. Consequently more services are available online making it economical both to the producers and consumers.
Furthermore, internet has reshaped the communication way significantly. Through the Facebook, Instagram and twitter people can communicate easily wherever in the world. Additionally, they express their emotions and lifestyles through these modes of communication. Earlier it was hideous to make an international call while at present the video conferencing has made meeting between business entrepreneur easily. Hence, has enabled and accelerated the communication way.
To conclude, necessity is the mother of invention truly internet has made the life easy and blessed. It provides information, help's business thrive, and changed communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , yahoo
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Suggestion: Consequently,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, similarly, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90384615385 4.8611393121 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24898482097 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8969240577 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2941176471 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109257790884 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346302909581 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369540970804 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560639722906 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318486511407 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 10.9000537634 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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