Agree/ Disagree The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Traveling is an important part of peoples’ lives. It is thought by some people that it is better if people travel alone and enjoy the trip entirely by themselves. others, of course, disagree with that statement. they believe that people would really enjoy their trip when they are in a group, which is led by a tour guide. this essay will discuss why traveling with a tour guide, in fact, is one of the best things that should be experienced by all people at least once in a lifetime.
First of all, traveling together with other people whom are guided by a tour guide is very exciting. people would not waste their time looking around to find the best places. people who lead the tour guide have already set up a plan for tourists, so they would have a chance to enjoy the most beautiful places that are worth visiting. For instance, my personal experience is a compelling example of this. Five years ago, I went to Greece for two weeks. There, I signed up for a tour guide, which helped me to organize my trip and get the most out of it. I was glad that I did that because if I were alone, I would not have a chance to see a lot of interesting things in a limited time. Overall, a tour guide would help people to visit new places in a short period of time.
Secondly, it is important to consider the fact that being together with a tour guide, people could meet new people from different places and backgrounds. Therefore, tourists would be able to expand their social network, which would riche their lives. For instance, statistics have shown that people would live longer if they have active lives and a wide range of social circle. this supports the idea that it is better for people to seek out any trip that includes a tour guide.
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- Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... a group, which is led by a tour guide. this essay will discuss why traveling with a...
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...uided by a tour guide is very exciting. people would not waste their time looking arou...
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...looking around to find the best places. people who lead the tour guide have already se...
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...is. Five years ago, I went to Greece for two weeks. There, I signed up for a tour...
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...s glad that I did that because if I were alone, I would not have a chance to see ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, for instance, in fact, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49221183801 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33657735886 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510903426791 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4285674422 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8235294118 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18500921514 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063668805079 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568077303599 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142325401698 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786881696783 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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