Agree or disagree? choose the difficult or challenging classes in college or university though you can not get a great grade
To purchase a great career path, we must have a great academic background, so it follows that we must get good grades during college. Nowadays admission offices take grades more seriously. While knowledge is important, I must indicate that we should put lots of effort into our academic grades. We can’t go into great graduate schools or get great positions unless we have good grades.
Foremost, there are many ways to learn a concept, except for university-classes. If I take that challenging course as a regular class, I would end up with a bad grade; which would ruin my transcript; however, I can learn about that concept from my other colleagues or online websites. There is no need to take that class, to learn the concept.
Besides, Challenging classes would take all of our study time throughout the semester. The more time a single course takes, the less I would have time for my other courses; eventually, I would get bad grades in many classes. This is especially true because of my stress level because of that class would not let me focus on other classes. Sometimes we should neglect an interesting class for other classes.
Indeed, we are not going to use most of the knowledge we acquired during university. Most of the students have basic knowledge; abilities such as communication, speech-abilities, and common-wisdom are more important for our future. We can sell our resume through good communication, regardless of our actual knowledge. A bad speaker has a low chance of promotion. It is the common-wisdom that would help one to adopt well, to find solutions with more ease, not the knowledge that he or she learned during school. All in all, taking a class would not be necessary, unless it is going to frame our future career path.
There are lots of educated people, but few good career positions. Our grades are one of the most important parts of our academic background. Today we can learn new concepts in many ways and all of the classes we take during college are not going to be practical in real life. In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that I should not take that class.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: take
...semester. The more time a single course takes, the less I would have time for my othe...
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... interesting class for other classes. Indeed, we are not going to use most of ...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...can learn new concepts in many ways and all of the classes we take during college are not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, well, while, except for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85013623978 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86502900206 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49591280654 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7667984579 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7619047619 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4761904762 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156064534661 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482878728282 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414077967863 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947927552498 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371367037874 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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