Agree or disagree it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject?Agree or disagree. it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject?
Today, many things are changing. The structure of business and different jobs are changing with the enhancement of technology. Consequently, people who have a lot of proficiencies are able to adapt to all those changes, therefore, able to succeed in everything they do. People should strive for broad knowledge in different academic subjects because it helps in adaptation, enhances innovation, and enhances critical thinking.
Firstly, the knowledge in numerous academic subjects favors simple adaptation. Many people try to do something and they find that what they planned to do is not panning out. When this happens, the first thing they do is to change the field of work. However, for people who don't have broad knowledge, it is not simple to change their field of work because they are not competitive in other fields. Therefore, people should strive for knowledge in more academic subjects.
Secondly, the knowledge in broad academic subjects enhances innovation. Most people who bring innovation in something, combine many things from different fields in order to make something good. For instance, Albert Einstein made changes in Physics, but he was not only a physicist, but also a mathematician and chemist. Therefore, people should search for knowledge in broad academic subjects.
Thirdly, having knowledge in more subjects enhances problem solving skills. Most of the times, people who solve difficult problems are the ones who have high critical thinking, and this critical thinking is brought by learning diverse things. Due to this fact, US colleges use libral arts where a student can learn more majors in order to let them get maximum of what they can, hence, enhancing their critical thinking.
To conclude, people should strive for more degree in different fields because many things are changing in this world, and people need to continuously adjust with those changes. Possessing more degrees in different fields helps a person to think critically in any problem, have innovation skills, and to adapt to any change in their fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35474006116 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69600268061 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498470948012 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3070076729 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2777777778 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190468747375 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843167403898 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913570704692 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122861055298 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523133198441 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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