Agree or disagree? It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor.
Friends are essential in our life. We can spend time either study or relax with them. However, it is important to consider a person's personality before making friend with he or she. Some people prefer making friends with people who have a good sense of humor, while others thinks that it is better to make friend with intelligent people. In my opinion I prefer the latter option.
To begin with, people can learn from their friends when they are intelligent. To be more specific, people who are intelligent will discuss about some topics that require professional knowledges. For example, I have a few friends who major in astronomy. Every time when we go out together, they like to talk about topics that are related to astronomy such as the black hole or the milky way. Therefore, since I am not familiar to these topics, I can learn a lot of information from them and improve myself. As a result, spending time with intelligent can be extremely helpful. It is true that some people said they can have a more relaxing time while spending time with friend who has a good sense of humor. However, I do not prefer this idea because I still feel relaxing when I am spending time with intelligent friends. Because of these reason, I personally believe that making friends with intelligent people is more beneficial than making friends with people who have a good sense of humor.
In addition, intelligent friends can be helpful in any situations. For instance, there was one time when my car engine was broken on the highway. Since it is on the first day of Chinese New Year, car companies were all close down and no one can help me. However, I suddenly remember that one of my friend is extremely good at fixing cars, so I called him and asked for his help. Later, he actually help me fixed my car and it can run very well without any problem. On the other hand, if I do not have a intelligent friend during that time, I can be in trouble because no one has this kind of knowledge to help me fix my car. Therefore, I will end up calling the police and it can be extremely expensive because it will cost a lot of money in my country when we ask a police to come and fix a car. As a result, by having intelligent friends can help us solve many difficulties, so I prefer having this kind of friends than friends who are funny.
Undoubtedly, some people may say that it is better to make friends with people who have a sense of humor, because it can be more relaxing to spend time with friends that is funny. However, I prefer making friends with intelligent people because I can not only spend time with them, but also learn from them at the same time. Thus, according to the reason upon, I prefer making friends with intelligent people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... However, it is important to consider a persons personality before making friend with h...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...jor in astronomy. Every time when we go out together, they like to talk about topic...
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Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
... asked for his help. Later, he actually help me fixed my car and it can run very wel...
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Line 5, column 502, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...em. On the other hand, if I do not have a intelligent friend during that time, I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49498997996 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46999170701 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.420841683367 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.332020977 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.72 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.96 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.68 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466777167721 0.236089414692 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162473626554 0.076458572812 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188966843571 0.0737576698707 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.381316501969 0.150856017488 253% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161424406882 0.0645574589148 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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