agree or disagree that teachers have greater effects on students than friends.
No one can deny that teachers have a magnificent effect on student’s lives. However, is it fair to state that teachers influence students more than friends? From my point of view, personally, I cannot entirely agree with this statement for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, we all met some teachers who do not care about their students; because they believe that they are only responsible for delivering the subject to their students and ignoring other details like behavior. Therefore, students do not have a special relationship with those teachers to consider them as an essential person in their life. On the other hand, we can notice that students, especially young adults, influence their friends more than anybody, even more than their parents. For instance, our neighbor, Sami, is fourteen years old. He has a few friends who used to hang out with them after school hours. I noticed that he imitates them in talking, walking, and communicating with others. When I spoke to him, I discovered that his teacher does not affect the entire class because he does not care about them.
What’s more, one of the tremendous optimal reasons is that kids usually prefer their friends because they typically have the same mentality and thoughts. They do not feel embarrassed or afraid when they talk to them, in contraction to their teachers or parents. For example, when I was in middle school, I had a problem with one of the students. However, I was shy and uncomfortable, talking to the teacher or my parent. Therefore, I asked my close friend Lily for advice to solve the problem.
In conclusion, we cannot ignore the significant role of teachers in our life; but, the vast majority of kids prefer to talk with their friends instead of parents or educators. They usually like to talk to someone close to their age because they feel more comfortable talking to them. Yet, sometimes the problem with teachers themselves, because they do not show enough care about students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 827, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss because he does not care about them. What’s more, one of the tremendous optim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95894428152 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62103490265 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539589442815 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.175175309 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9444444444 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218105806159 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770770158802 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807559813174 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159573508341 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994028514229 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.