All over the world we lose natural resources, for example, water, trees, fuel and so on but, the most important resource is clean water. Without clean water there is no chance of living on Earth. And in my opinion, it’s a huge problem for everyone on Earth.
First of all, I think that clean water gets depleted from human beings. Each year we pollute the seas and oceans by taking out other natural resources and I also think that government should realize the seriousness of this problem. With no clean water around us we can get a lot of diseases and with it we will have great population loss problems mainly because we can’t survive by not drinking clean water.
Second of all, I think that without clean water, plants and animals will get disappeared too, mainly because plants and animals are like us they can’t survive without water and if there are no plants it means there is no air so this is leading to a global catastrophe. A lot of geologists are now suggesting some solutions to this problem, but no one listens to them and it’s too bad.
Finally, in my opinion the whole world should take the example of Africa, partly because a lot of us have seen what happened to Africans in the past few years. They did not have clean water so their immune system was getting very low and they were dying eventually. Africans even got a lot of new diseases which was very hard to cure. I don’t know what people are thinking, but someone have to stop this.
All in all, I think that my perspective is right and. People don’t want the world to be ruined, but they also don’t want to help. I hope one day this will stop and we will live in a clean and healthy world.
All over the world we lose natural resources, for example, water, trees, fuel and so on but, the most important resource is clean water. Without clean water there is no chance of living on Earth. And in my opinion, it’s a huge problem for everyone on Earth.
First of all, I think that clean water gets depleted from human beings. Each year we pollute the seas and oceans by taking out other natural resources and I also think that government should realize the seriousness of this problem. With no clean water around us we can get a lot of diseases and with it we will have great population loss problems mainly because we can’t survive by not drinking clean water.
Second of all, I think that without clean water, plants and animals will get disappeared too, mainly because plants and animals are like us they can’t survive without water and if there are no plants it means there is no air so this is leading to a global catastrophe. A lot of geologists are now suggesting some solutions to this problem, but no one listens to them and it’s too bad.
Finally, in my opinion the whole world should take the example of Africa, partly because a lot of us have seen what happened to Africans in the past few years. They did not have clean water so their immune system was getting very low and they were dying eventually. Africans even got a lot of new diseases which was very hard to cure. I don’t know what people are thinking, but someone have to stop this.
All in all, I think that my perspective is right and. People don’t want the world to be ruined, but they also don’t want to help. I hope one day this will stop and we will live in a clean and healthy world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 392, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...w what people are thinking, but someone have to stop this. All in all, I think t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, for example, i think, first of all, in my opinion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52903225806 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34681797986 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525806451613 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4524878284 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.519335258311 0.236089414692 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184008374547 0.076458572812 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190564378827 0.0737576698707 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336776472571 0.150856017488 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.320285273821 0.0645574589148 496% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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