Although life today is better than it used to be, human behavior is causing behavior that will mean life future less comfortable
I disagree with the opinion the human behavior would make life comfortable in the years to come. Diverse development in every area of human endeavor to simplify and pose solution will make tomorrow easy and comfortable.
The introduction of artificial intelligence is a tip of industry 4.0 of few to come. AI is a program and that reason or mimic human behavior to replicate the activity. For example, robots doing house chores like washing plates, cleaning the house etc. are comfort we would enjoy in the future. Not only in terms of physical robots but also, AI incorporated in our phones, that help predict what next to type while chatting and automatically correct spelling thereby making typing and working easy.
Furthermore, the development of advanced network like 5G would be a lot in nearly every industry. In health industry, imagine doctor operation caesarian section remotely, thereby saving time, and saving life. The emergence of drone ambulance which could be used to transfer of blood using from one state to another is one of the comfortabilities that are yet to be fully experience. In future, is going to be more comfortable due to recent discovery in modern technologies.
Farming and agriculture made easier. Every aspect of food supply is making development for better future. It’s making the future juicy from planting to supply chain and to final products been automated. IOT is doing a great job to animal husbandry for seamless animal farming and GMO in providing crops that gives high yield with a short period of time. All this today efforts, improving and solving one human challenge would make tomorrow better.
Conclusively, all the effort in agriculture, health sector and network improvement would bring the comfort we dream of.
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain. 75
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculam untill they enter college. 50
- Although life today is better than it used to be, human behavior is causing behavior that will mean life future less comfortable 76
- So long as they are aware of the dangers involved, adults should not be legally bound to use seat belts.Write a response in which you discuss your own opinions on the statement. Decide whether you agree or disagree, and present a persuasive case with clea 54
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...es that are yet to be fully experience. In future, is going to be more comfortable due to...
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Line 7, column 345, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...rops that gives high yield with a short period of time. All this today efforts, improving and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15916955017 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79994731814 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615916955017 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2256848752 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7058823529 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210401185052 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586236433464 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063769847451 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103041064851 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646517717727 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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