Although science and technology continue to improve the most significant improvements in people s lives have already taken place

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Although science and technology continue to improve, the most significant improvements in people’s lives have already taken place.

Life improvement, the foundation of a quality life, has been valued and even triggers a heated discussion over whether the most significant improvements in people’s lives have already taken place. The most important changes, in some people’s views, have not yet taken place. Contrary to these people’s opinions is my perspective that the most significant changes in our lives have already taken place due to their contributions to people’s personal and professional life.

What must be prioritized is that science and technology have made huge progresses and totally changed people’s personal life, by helping them know the person from all over the world and better explore the whole world. To begin with, it is scientific and technological advancement that enables people to contact and make acquaintances with people from all over the world. In detail, with the aid of advanced social media, people can have easy access to different people from different countries and have an adequate communication with them, thus becoming good friends with those people from diverse cultures; however, such changes could not be reproduced by later scientific advancements since those changes can only slightly improve people’s communications. Moreover, people, by making full use of the Internet and other powerful tools, can explore diverse knowledge about the world. To explain it further, technology have transformed the Internet into a powerful tool by which people can search and explore whatever they want to know, like different natural sceneries and different local customs, within just a few milliseconds, thus enabling people to fully explore the whole world; on the contrary, it is impossible for people to make such revolutionary changes by just making some tiny scientific changes.

What should be equally worth discussing is that the most significant improvements have already taken place and changed people’s professional life, by helping people improve their work efficiency and reduce their work errors. Initially, it is the scientific and technological improvement that helps people increase their work efficiency and save more time. Specifically, with the aid of modern technology, machines are able to operate precisely under rigorous codes and thus can replace people to do some tedious and repetitive jobs, which can help employees save more time and improve their work efficiency; on the other hand, such help offered by those precise machines could only be modified but could not be reproduced because of its revolutionary properties. Additionally, the adoption of modern technology is conducive to people’s work by helping them reduce the work errors. To be more specific, people nowadays are able to use advanced machines to help them avoid certain errors, like using machines to do some repetitive work and using complicated machines to help them double check their work output, which can avoid many mistakes and huge losses to a great extent; in contrast, it is pretty hard to make some innovations and contributions to reproduce the functions of those great changes which are essential to people’s work.

Personal life, the foundation of a quality life, has already been changed significantly due to the improvements of science and technology. Professional life, the essential contributor to the development of society, has already benefited a lot from the significant changes that have taken place. To conclude, only by considering the improvements that have changed people’s personal and professional life can we conclude that the most significant improvements in people’s lives have already taken place.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, in contrast, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3093.0 1977.66487455 156% => OK
No of words: 562.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50355871886 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95286882162 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425266903915 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 971.1 618.680645161 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 4.94265232975 344% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.347855256 48.9658058833 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.3125 100.406767564 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.125 20.6045352989 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381829264024 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181431138407 0.076458572812 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137213992622 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309958118605 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143203098705 0.0645574589148 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 11.7677419355 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 58.1214874552 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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