always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship
Nowadays quality of relationship between people plays an important role in making a stable and developed society and country. Based on these relationships a society figure out, and so if people could have a relationships considering humanity factors, they will have a society that guarantees their good quality of life. One of the most important factors which should be considered in any relationship between people is honesty and telling the truth. Even though some people thinks that telling the truth always has not positive results, I believe that we have to tell the truth in any condition for two important reasons.
The first reason is telling the truth makes a deep and relying relationship which can last forever. If you always be honest with your friend and telling everything frankly, your friend will trust you. The relationship which is based on trust never will diminish. The relationship between spouses is one of the most important relationships which needs honesty. My friends relation wit her wife is a compelling example for this. He married when he was twenty one years old. He had finished his college recently and only had part time job with a low salary. During their first year of their life they ha a lot of economical problems, so he had to work until midnight. But they never had problem in their married life because the trust always was in between them an her wife knew that his working late is for their life. This is an example which indicate the importance of trust and telling truth between people.
The second reason is that lying always has a negative and embarresing results. If people lye, one day it will covert and provide bad results for them. My friends story which is working for an insurrance company is a good example for this. He says that one of their customers had car accident but he changed the pictures of accident using computer programs to get more money from insurance company. But after one year the company understood that the pictures are not real, so they get all of money from the customer and closed all their services for him. This example shows that we do not have use lying to cheat people because one they we will embaress.
I conclusion I believe that, our life must be based on the truth because with truth, we will have strong relationships and a society that brings us an atmosphere that we easily trust each other to have better life.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...tionship which can last forever. If you always be honest with your friend and telling eve...
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Suggestion: will never diminish
...he relationship which is based on trust never will diminish. The relationship between spouses is on...
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Suggestion: part-time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, frankly, if, second, so, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75598086124 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5007633733 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3667972521 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267605175579 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909643108889 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115357417955 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173749837764 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137705897515 0.0645574589148 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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