In every relationship there are difficult situations that we cannot avoid lying. I am in the opinion that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. I have two reasons for this essay.
To begin with, lying can break the trust. If you tell a lie, people will advise you not to repeat this anymore. Nevertheless, when you tell a lie one more time people really get upset and do not trust you forever. For example, my father hates lying. When I had a trouble like I do not do my homework, I always made excuses. My father forgave me the first few times; however, I was scolded because I got caught using it as a habit later. Hence, my father does not believe me anymore. As a result, I promised my dad I would not lie.
Secondly, telling the truth can build good image. Everyone has heard the shepherd boy story once. That is what we call people who lie a lot and his/her image turns bad. A person’s impression plays an important role in life. So if you tell lies a lot your image will not be good. After that, you will be branded as a liar. For instance, my friend often did not tell the truth; however, other friends knew that he was lying. But they put up with it. He lied a lot each day, and people stopped making friends with him because he built a bad image.
In conclusion, telling the truth can make your relationship better and gives you a good image.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ession plays an important role in life. So if you tell lies a lot your image will not...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill not be good. After that, you will be branded as a liar. For instance, my frie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 52.1666666667 25% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 262.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43129770992 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43289101387 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3643578545 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.2857142857 100.406767564 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4761904762 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249574567889 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761317562423 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173907490832 0.0737576698707 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208797046691 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174434508721 0.0645574589148 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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