Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
there are some people who tell lies in a relationship with others to keep it, while others dispute this practice. I am recon that relationship between people should be hounset without any lies even the small ones and I will elabroate by giving several reasons.
First of all, when people begin to lie it is over for them to be believed by others een if they were telling the truth. Furthermore, this practice will harm the whole comuntiy, for instance, I remeber one time there is an employee in a company I worked with. Who is usually lies to his manger and there was an opening in the upper mangment but unfortinalty, he did not take because of his laying. the point of this example is that laying could harm your career.
In addition, people tend to tell lies because it hides the problem they are facing which is not true, in fact, if you lie to escape from the problem it will return in the near future with bigger impact in your relationship, and every one should express what he truely feel to the other to live a bautifull relationship.
Finally, If everyone lies in their relationship no one will believe the other which is essenital to the relationship. Furthermore, Imagine if you lie to your wife/husband evey time you get to home it only decrease the trust between you and her/him which will affect your life in the long run.
To sum up, I believe that telling the truth is the most important thing in a relationship for multiple reasons. First, not telling the truth could harm your career. Second, it will harm your relationship with others. Finally, it will affect your relationship with your partner and you may have a devorce in a near future over some simple thing that does not need to be lied about.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there are some people who tell lies in a rela...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... he did not take because of his laying. the point of this example is that laying co...
^^^
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...sband evey time you get to home it only decrease the trust between you and her/him which...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60322580645 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51898307942 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506451612903 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0541287808 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22033432943 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092125115497 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825229968295 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130345914539 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639642670396 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there are some people who tell lies in a rela...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... he did not take because of his laying. the point of this example is that laying co...
^^^
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...sband evey time you get to home it only decrease the trust between you and her/him which...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60322580645 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51898307942 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506451612903 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0541287808 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22033432943 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092125115497 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825229968295 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130345914539 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639642670396 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.