are parents the best teacher
Without any doubt, parents have an important role in their children life. They have influenced many aspects of their children live from teaching them basic skills until shaping their personalities. They sacrifice themselves to make a better life for their children. Definitely, some people if asked would agree with the statement that parents are the best teacher while others have a negative attitude. In my perspective, although parents teach their kids rudimentary skills, they are not the best teacher for their children, their kids need to be trained by professional teachers. To shed light on this argument, two main reasons are going to be discussed in the following paragraphs.
The first and most exquisite point to be mentioned is that nowadays both parents often work fulltime. Since teaching various topics to children is a time-consuming process, parents need to rely on a teacher to educate their offspring's. Take me as an example, my parents overwhelming with their jobs; they work 12 hours per day and sometimes more than this. They even have not enough time to fulfill household chores. If I were supposed to be trained by my parents, surely, I completely missed the educating process. As you see, children need to person like a teacher who has devoted her/him fulltime to train many subjects for children.
Another reason is that most of the parents are educated in a specific field and there are not qualified to educate diversity of area to their kids. Children should be trained in much knowledge including math, physic, chemistry, literature, art and so on. Many parents have not enough information to instruct their kids on these topics. For instance, when I was in high school, my math teacher gave me the question as a homework about an equation, lengthy one that could be bewildered anyone at first their glance. I often had trouble with the math question. Unfortunately, my parents could not help me to solve the question. I am obliged to get assistance from my uncle who was a math teacher. So children need to be educated by professional teachers who often well trained and therefore have sufficient knowledge in many sciences.
In conclusion, in spite the fact that parents can be trained their children basic skills but they are not the best teacher. Their offsprings must be educated by a professional person like an instructor with high knowledge possession who has enough time to teach children many of topics that would be important for children's future life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be important for childrens future life.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04337349398 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74629667903 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50843373494 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8016765847 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1363636364 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22727272727 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255544271753 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899047636892 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099649225311 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180978789018 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025017188885 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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