Being successful has several meanings, and each of us has a different definition of success. To some people, being rich and renowned is success, whereas some think that maintaining happy and healthy family is a way of success. Most common meaning of success may be doing outstanding work and being promoted faster than colleagues at work or getting good grades at school. In this regard, I agree with the statement that we should be creative to be successful in our lives for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, being creative is important to be successful in the information age. In the past, people with more knowledge and experience had power. Before the advent of internet, books and experience were almost the only source to get information when people did their jobs. However, these days, people can search and google almost everything very easily if they have access to internet. With a flood of information, creative people who knows how to use their knowledge and create new things which others can’t think of are likely to be successful at their work. For example, there is a very famous Youtuber named Dotti in Korea. He used his creativity to make video contents of playing Minecraft for kids. There were many people who enjoyed Minecraft, but he was the first person who came up with the idea of recording how he played the game and providing video lectures of the game strategy for kids. His idea was a huge success and made him very popular among school kids. Drawing from this example, creativity is a key factor for success these days.
Second, creative people can bring more efficient while working, and thus, tend to be successful at work. Being creative means that people are open-minded and flexible thinkers. For this reason, creative people tend to think up of innovative ideas that can cause more productivity at work. For instance, my brother used to be very creative since he was young. When we drew something together, he always made me surprised with creative color combination and paintings. Thanks to his creativity, he could be successful at his work, too. As a computer programmer, he was good at finding problems and new solutions. His way of creative and flexible thinking helped him develop easy ways to perform projects faster than his coworkers, and he got promoted very soon after he started his work.
Considering the above reasons, I strongly believe that people must be creative to be successful. With the advent of internet, everything is a matter of speed. Only people or company who bring new ideas faster than others survive in the information age, and creativity works crucial there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93640350877 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61026363839 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504385964912 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7131624908 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.04 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.24 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.12 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4642500086 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140906860794 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127497210411 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320826234824 0.150856017488 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129178531164 0.0645574589148 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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