Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Over the past few years, the issues of whether or not as a result of high technology and change the word people become happier than the previous generation has received a great deal of attention from psychologists and socialists. Although some may say that in the past people became more satisfied because of simple lifestyle; I, as well as many others, believe that human life is changing alongside the world, and human life become easier and happier in contrast to the past because of having high technologies, advance public transportations, and easy access to everything.
First of all, an important reason why human life becomes easier by changing the world compare to the past is that high technology brings many facilities for human life. In the past, family members, especially mother and girl, had done home works, such as washing dishes, cleaning the home, washing clothes and many other similar duties by their hand, so these duties took a lot of time and energy from them. For example, for washing clothes, they had been gone to near rivers and washed clothes with their hands and used water of rivers. Without any doubts, it was a hard duty for them. However, now people are using a washing machine for washing clothes, they push one key, and their clothes become clean; hence, they are able to save their time, energy, and water source. So, changing the word helps people become more happy and satisfied than in the past.
Another reason for this point of view is that high technology makes advanced transportation systems for people. The previous generation used to some animals for travelling between their village and cities, or they had used some simple automobiles that took a lot of time and energy for travelling. Nevertheless, in this era, due to the development of technology advance, public transportation systems are invented by scientists such as high-speed trains, high technological cars, the development of the airplane, and many other items to make human life easier. The human can use the airplane for travelling long distance such as between countries in the shortest time, or they use a high technology car with advanced facilities items for travelling. In this situation, people save their time and energy in the best way.
Finally, it is occasionally said that a hectic lifestyle makes the distance between people. In the modern era, people busier than the previous generation, so the distance between them becomes greater. As a result, people would not see each other for a long time; hence, modern technology helps people to solve these kinds of problems. For example, some members of the family may prefer to live in other cities or countries, and they do not see their family members for a long time. In this situation, high technology such as the internet, smartphone, and application helps people to see each other from a long distance without any problems.
In conclusion, considering the ideas presented in the paragraphs above, I personally believe that changing the world helps people to have easier life compared to the past chiefly due to having high technology, advanced public transportations, and easy access to everything.
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- TPO 34 76
- Do you agree or disagree? It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ jobs. 70
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- If there is a way to improve yourself which one among the three choices you would take 1 Take more exercise 2 Eat healthy food 3 Reduce the amount of stress 81
- TPO 21 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... Over the past few years, the issues of whether or not as a result of high technology and chan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2668.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07224334601 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68343296967 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43536121673 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 822.6 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.4287835315 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.421052632 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6842105263 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84210526316 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213122421198 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813532291244 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830470688252 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132925441531 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057480902772 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.