With the lightning speed of technological evolution, it is possible to travel from one country to another country by airplane. The airplane has a great impact on human's lives in the current scenario. It has open up various sources in the whole world. I feel this way for a few reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Primarily, the invention of airplanes is the biggest achievements of mankind, which has helped people to fulfill their dreams. Air traveling has become cheaper compared to the past days, so a number of people can travel through airplanes. However, in the past days, traveling through airplanes was only restricted to wealthy people. Moreover, nothing can beat the convenience of a plane. For instance, now, people can easily travel to thousands of miles away within a few hours, whereas, the same distance would have taken several months in the old days. Thus, the airplane has made people's lives easy.
Furthermore, the invention of modern transportation, the airplane, in particular, has greatly transformed people's lives. Many people are traveling to abroad these days, and thereby, cultural difference and inequality have been reduced gradually. As a result, more people have started adopting different cultural values and the world has become a small place. Besides, airplanes make traveling much safer and comfortable. Sheltered from the sunlight, rain, hot or freezing temperature, people can now fly in the air, without being exposed to bad climates or strong winds. All these things have become possible with the invention of airplanes.
To add to this, the airplane plays an important role in other fields as well. A large quantity of goods can be transformed from one place to another place through airplanes. Two years back, my city was suffered by an earthquake and many building and residential places were almost destroyed. At that time, a large number of rescue team members and goods were transported to the damaged areas with the help of the airplanes. Consequently, more than a thousand lives are saved. Nowadays, in the global anti-terrorist war, military forces can be dispatched and deployed in a short time to an area where a terrorist attack has occurred.
All in all, I strongly believe the airplanes have undoubtedly changed people's lives. Although there are other ways of transportation which may be more comfortable, none has changed our lives the way airplanes have changed it. We can accomplish many things that could never have been done by ancient people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 306, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...es were almost destroyed. At that time, a large number of rescue team members and goods were tran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, i feel, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14598540146 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79464088938 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566909975669 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6778084659 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.44 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.48 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124503810548 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337677806203 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344099140226 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702799515432 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249584212124 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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