Choose a technological advancement in transportation or communication, and give reasons why you think it is important.
A brief look thorough human history reminds us that human beings are social creatures and never stop finding new ways of communication and connection. In recent decades, the most revolutionary mean of transportation has been the space-x project, directed by the genius Ellon Musk. I believe it is the most important innovation of human history after the internet, and I provide some reasons below why I think so.
To begin with, scientists all know that Earth may once be incapable of supporting the growing population of humans. Finding new habitats and settling there is crucial for the continuation of our life. Space-X helps the passengers go to and come from space stations frequently, with reasonable expenses.
Moreover, it helps the national space projects to be executed with lower budgets than before. Space-X projects let the safe landing of shuttles, while the currently employed technology usually leads to serious damages to the returning spacecraft. Saving the money helps the astronomical projects to expand their research funding and expand the boundaries of our knowledge about the unknown space.
Finally, this revolutionary transportation method, enable the common people to go for space-traveling. It is so curious to spend your vacation, for example, on the moon. Consider a young school kid who travels to the space station at the weekend. The unique eye-opening experience may encourage him/her to become an astronaut in the future. In addition, people who can see their home, i.e. the Earth, from the above space might rethink their hostile or selfish behaviors toward each other, since it reminds them how weak and vulnerable we are in the vast universe, and we need to support each other.
In conclusion, I believe the Space-X project is a prominent advancement in transportation, which not only influence the faith of human beings as a unique form of life in the universe but also facilitate further discoveries of the unknown space. Besides the scientific influences, it can have social effects by increasing the access of common people to space.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26347305389 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91093112694 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622754491018 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7944125832 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.875 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860374218439 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266282661224 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455753947879 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0466107465533 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503614676321 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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