College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Currently,there is a lot of fluctuation occurs everyday in job market. it will be very difficult to decide about the field of study as per jobs availability. Though, I would be in favour of choice of course work should depend on whatever jobs available in market. I am going to describe this way.
To start with, field of study is a basic need when anyone want to apply for a job. if there are opportunities or market situation of a specific technology is not in demand than it won't be a good decision to go with that field of study. Because after completing college again it would be challenge for you to find a suitable carrier. However, most of the college providing variety of trending course work so that it never be big problem for upcoming students. but I think to focus on a particular stream and to do specialization in that , help to find out better jobs. Not only it would help in finding jobs, but during your carrier it will act like a backbone which supports in any critical conditions for upper level growth.
Secondly, it is quite easier to get possible jobs in a specialized field. As an example from my personal experience, during graduation I have studied a different kind of subjects ,those are related to various technologies. For a short term I was so much happy and confident about my job. but when I completed my graduation that variation in technologies became headache for me and didn't get any desirable jobs. In every interview everybody asked my specialization course, but I was not able answer that. At that moment, I realized it would have been better if I masters only in one subject. And all my friends got job so soon. I need to struggle a lot. but that was not the dead end. I tried for many good companies and after a long time I got selected but really it was very tough competition.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that never we should not scatter our thoughts and actions in various ways instead of keep focusing on one direction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Currently,there is a lot of fluctuation occurs everyday...
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...ctuation occurs everyday in job market. it will be very difficult to decide about ...
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...ield of study as per jobs availability. Though, I would be in favour of choice of cour...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ld of study is a basic need when anyone want to apply for a job. if there are opport...
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...ed when anyone want to apply for a job. if there are opportunities or market situa...
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
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...iety of trending course work so that it never be big problem for upcoming students. but ...
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...r be big problem for upcoming students. but I think to focus on a particular stream...
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... stream and to do specialization in that , help to find out better jobs. Not only ...
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...er to get possible jobs in a specialized field. As an example from my personal ex...
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...ave studied a different kind of subjects ,those are related to various technologie...
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... much happy and confident about my job. but when I completed my graduation that var...
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...ariation in technologies became headache for me and didnt get any desirable jobs....
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...echnologies became headache for me and didnt get any desirable jobs. In every interv...
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Line 4, column 564, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'master'
Suggestion: master
...realized it would have been better if I masters only in one subject. And all my friends...
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... job so soon. I need to struggle a lot. but that was not the dead end. I tried for...
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.... but that was not the dead end. I tried for many good companies and after a long...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, kind of, of course, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58873239437 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78068180971 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2999524541 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5714285714 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177055416008 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465454823715 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051551411184 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100259854949 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690842303965 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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