Have you ever wonder what is the best time in a person's life? From birth to death, every part of a person's life is memorable and unique. However, I believe that the college years are the best time in a person's life. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, it is a door to make your future better and brighter. It is time when you discover what you are good at and what you want to be or what you want to contribute to your community/society. Students have an opportunity to learn more things about a certain topic that they are interested in since they were kids. Sometimes students have problems such as education issues, personal issues, career planning or personal development; colleges provide facilities like student advisors to those who have these problems and provide them the right path to go.
Secondly, college years are like a semi-adulthood for those after high-school. These are years where teenagers feel excited about what is going to happen in their life, imagine things that might happen and have the freedom to be themselves and do what they want. They will also learn how to take responsibility, how to take care of themselves, how to look smart and gentle et cetera. My sister's experience is a compelling example of this. As soon as she was in college, she straight up felt like a young-adult. This feeling gives her a lot of confidence to do well in most of her presentation, the ability to solve most of the challenges and made the right decision for her life. Overcoming these challenges made her a better version of herself.
Last but not least, the college year helps improve your social skills since making new friends are definitely inevitable. You will meet a lot of people from different countries and cultures. These new friends will be very important in a person's life. They are those few peoples who help you during difficult times, laugh at you ridiculous jokes or thoughts and have fun together with you. Friends in college years last longer than you thought. They will be your closest family when you study abroad. For instance, they might even be your business partner or relationship partner.
In conclusion, I agree with this statement "The college years are the best time in a person's life.". This is because it shows you the right way, makes you feel enthusiastic about everything and you make friends who will become a very important person for you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77102803738 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69030261976 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509345794393 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9718659358 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7826086957 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6086956522 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339451511201 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952440465693 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942643451284 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21207041366 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913588580797 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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