A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
To have a company build near your community, has its own advantages and disadvantages. Because of environment purposes many may disagree with such a situation. In contrary big companies bring lots of improvement in economic aspects. In my opinion there are so many advantages and disadvantages that this event results.
Having a company build near your community can conclude an economic growth. It brings new jobs, better opportunities for different levels of the community, and advances in different aspects of the people living in that community. Opening a new company requires various skills thus this will lead for many people to acquire new jobs. On the other hand, when the level of community rises in economic aspects, people are more satisfied with their lives. So as a result the community will have better lifestyles and be more satisfied with their lives.
Big companies can result environmental problems. Communities that live near big companies always have problems surrounding health issues. Companies mostly have chemical residual that pollutes water, soil, and air. This event will cause directly the communities living near these companies. Many will have problem living in this kind of situation due to their health problems. For instance, in china there are many cities that their people suffocate from breathing problems. So it is vital to pay attention to the healthiness of the environment you choose to live in.
There are many impacts that big companies can bring upon us. These impacts are such as economic growth or health issues. It is up to people to decide whether they want to live in such communities with a company nearby or not. I myself like to live in a city with healthy environment.
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- A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position. 90
- Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat foot at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 100
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s its own advantages and disadvantages. Because of environment purposes many may disagr...
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Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...ntages. Because of environment purposes many may disagree with such a situation. In cont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1134751773 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75063038351 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.144977857 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.1 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165069126192 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567552508154 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785440164595 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114367874461 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739214615426 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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