If a company wishes to build a large factory near my community, surely there might be positive and negative consequences about this matter. There are many pros and cons of building a large factory near any civilized community. It will provide taxes, employment for local people, increase revenue, improve the community in different aspects but it might pollute surroundings environment such as air, water, soil. Besides the disadvantages, I think, a large factory will help my community for many reasons.
First of all, it will provide employment for local people. if a factory would build in my community it would surely need some manpower such as engineers, builders, labors and other related farms for building purpose. For this, they would prefer local people for those works. In this way, the unemployment rate will decrease rapidly. The company will use local material for building such as silica, cement, reinforcement which would boost local business. People who live in this community could buy these factories products very cheaply.
Secondly, to run the factory, they have to build roads and highways. In this way, my local community will also be improved. Besides, the factory would try local raw materials for their production. For instance, there is a Suger Mill in my community right now. To run this factory they need sugarcane and our local people produce a large amount of sugarcane for the factory. This way, the farmers of my community get a large amount of profit through this sugarcane, whereas other communities nearby hardly can sell their crops such as jute, wheat and so on. Besides this, the government earns huge taxes through the sugar mill.
Finally, it is true that sometimes a different company pollutes the environment. Some factories might pollute the soil or water by dumping chemical waste into the rivers or local landfills. But, if the factory takes proper precautions for this they can save the environment from polluting. Besides, nowadays every government have requirement from factories to save the environment. If the company can follow those requirements then I think it would not be a problem at all.
In conclusion, I think everyone should think positive about building a factory. With taking different steps we could prevent or minimize those disadvantages. And looking aforementioned advantage. I think it would be beneficial for my local community.
- TOEFL T P O 18 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TOEFL T P O 12 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Many people believe that it is very important to make large amount of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each view point and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position. 60
- A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. do you support or oppose the factory? 73
- Independent TOEFL essay - TPO 8: Agree or disagree? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ll provide employment for local people. if a factory would build in my community i...
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Line 7, column 383, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...from factories to save the environment. If the company can follow those requiremen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22739018088 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7555931616 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514211886305 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7776114782 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8076923077 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8846153846 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194191961021 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637684320246 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718025150637 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123897964292 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696870560249 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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